I looked at the sky, just to be sad,
I could not see the sun, nor the light,
I sat down, head low, eyes swollen,
then i looked up again....
Ahh, I saw a twinkling star !
I was struck by its power, kept looking at it...
and received an enormous light in a while !!!
It was far away from me,
but was enough to bring back my smile....!
I could not see the sun, nor the light,
I sat down, head low, eyes swollen,
then i looked up again....
Ahh, I saw a twinkling star !
I was struck by its power, kept looking at it...
and received an enormous light in a while !!!
It was far away from me,
but was enough to bring back my smile....!
2 comments:
This one is cool. Straight, simple and direct. Nice depiction of mood swing. Work up on the rhyme. :)
hmmm hmmm hmmm...
The analogy is that the sun when distant appears as a star. Even when its distant, it is able to send the rays of light spontaneously.
I hope this is what it means. Forgive me if wrong. Great worl indeed. Simplicity of expression is exemplary. Need to work more on vocabulary.
-Siddharth
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