He thought its all over,
all is over and out,
Smooth had it gone,
Without any doubt !
Forgetting all sins,
Feeling all content,
He calmly put on his shoes,
back to his home he went.
In the night he thought,
He will see a dream again,
He hasn't done anything wrong,
not coz of him that it rains.
He remembered he was pardoned ,
By a loving heart that he ripped,
Its just fine that he did it all,
Someone's life he had stripped !
So what.. He didn't have to bear it after all,
Neither he had to cry,
It just went so easy,
To him, she did not try !
Forgetting all discomfort,
He slept in his bed,
Watching the panorama,
Another abode that lay ahead !
Thunder broke with HIS expression,
Anger poured down with pain,
Tears from the sky,
Fell through the rain.
A lightening struck his house,
All was in fire and ash,
He was still lying dreamy,
Unaware of the hit from the sky..
He opened his eyes for a moment,
Frightened was the heart,
But he thought its a nightmare,
Slept again, dreaming from the start.
Still he lies there dreaming,
The Punishment is an illusion,
Shameless naked animal will be glad,
Till he wakes up from his delusion !
3 comments:
I am moved ! Your anguish is well expressed but is in control. It seems you believe a lot in God's justice.
I am not only moved by the context but i am also able to see how anger has also been given to God to use.
You seem to be very very God fearing and spiritual.
Good try. I would suggest you to write more about the social issues related to women. You have a fire within. Bring it out !
Vasudev
Nice one. The words are chosen well. Providence ain't my favourite, but the depiction of the scene was quite vivid. Great going. :)
the poem is beautiful... n I can empathize with it.. and I can feel a strong connect with the 'he' of this poem.. gud stuff prachi!
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